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LinkedIn Message: Hello [firstname], I hope you’re having a wonderful day! I’m [myname], the Head Personal Traini...

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Hello [firstname], I hope you’re having a wonderful day!

I’m [myname], the Head Personal Training Coach and Online Training Specialist at [company], based in the heart of Midtown Manhattan.

Our passion is to transform lives through personalized fitness solutions, and I’m reaching out to you, whether you’re near or far. We proudly hold the title of “Best Of The City” personal training facility for four consecutive years and have received recognition from national publications like Muscle and Fitness, Forbes, and Men’s Journal, among others.

No matter where you are, we offer exceptional Online Training Programs to help you achieve your fitness goals just in time for the Holidays! We also offer a iron clad money back guarantee to all our online clients so you can rest assure your results are our hashtag#1 priority.

Let me know if you’d like to have a conversation or learn more about our online training options.

Message Categorisation
Type
LinkedIn Message
Character Length
147
Good or Bad message?
Bad
Target Company Size
One-Person Business, SMB, Enterprise
Prospect Seniority
Junior Level, Mid Level, Senior Level
Level of Assertiveness
Assertive
Customer/User = Prospect vs Company/Team
Individual
Message Analysis
Comments (if relevant):

Although this message establishes credibility nicely, and also starts with a warm tone, it's much too long and it's very hard-sell. There's no personalisation and it'svery clearly a blanket message.

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